I was waiting for your call to give me the number I needed.
But I never talked to you, how could I call?
We talked a week ago. I have it in my notes.
No that isn’t possible. I have been waiting for you
to return my call of last week.
I did return your call the same day last week.
But how is that possible? I would have remembered.
We didn’t talk. I know we didn’t.
It’s not a big deal. You can give me that number now.
Oh, but it is…a very big deal.
How does one forget an entire conversation?
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December 7th, 2010 at 12:55 pm
Thats wierd. lol
Interesting writing, these kind of conversations are always comical. lol
December 13th, 2010 at 7:45 pm
Yep, I’ll blame it on age :).
December 13th, 2010 at 8:08 pm
wow.. that kinda captivated me. The use of italics is effective. Intriguing, almost creepy… nice work
December 13th, 2010 at 8:45 pm
Imagine how creepy it is to take part in that conversation…very creepy.
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December 16th, 2010 at 10:34 am
lovely sentiments…
beautiful writing…Happy Thursday!
Merry Christmas.
Glad to see you around this week…
🙂
December 16th, 2010 at 1:37 pm
I come here after some time.. Busy I have been n am still.. 😦
I like this new template..
“I don’t remember” episode.. Very interesting and freaking at the same time.. Hope nothing important was ignored.. smiles xx
December 22nd, 2010 at 6:20 pm
It’s so good to see you here Olivia. We haven’t visited for quite a while now.
December 16th, 2010 at 6:47 pm
I’ve convinced myself of an uncomfortable event as being completed so I didn’t have to face it before, but I’ll blame it on drugs.
December 22nd, 2010 at 6:23 pm
Lol!
December 16th, 2010 at 10:22 pm
When you get to my place on the age spectrum, this is SCAREY. Creative and nicely written.
My rally: http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/16/duality/
December 22nd, 2010 at 6:24 pm
Of course first thing I thought was “Cancer? A brain tumor?” One bout with the big C and it’s all you think about.
December 16th, 2010 at 10:38 pm
Very engaging write…one of those situations that makes you wonder what is really going on…enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
December 22nd, 2010 at 6:27 pm
Thanks meremortal. I liked your stuff too.
December 17th, 2010 at 12:29 am
Well done. Got to me emotionally. Engages and enrages … as I imagine you were.
I look the new decor.
December 18th, 2010 at 1:51 pm
Yep, wrote it in the middle of the emotion.
December 17th, 2010 at 6:51 am
I agree..how can people forget an entire conversation…
Very well captured… 🙂
December 18th, 2010 at 5:47 pm
I have no idea- but I have forgotten at least two!
December 17th, 2010 at 11:42 am
I get it!
Good stuff–I feel ya
December 18th, 2010 at 10:41 am
Wow… that had me smiling, wondering, kind of angry and irritated too… it’s amazing how a simple work like this can captivate imagination… very well done!
December 18th, 2010 at 5:47 pm
Thanks orange!
December 18th, 2010 at 11:33 am
Oh I see my daily life in this. hee hee. Good job!
December 18th, 2010 at 5:49 pm
Good to know I am not the only one!
December 18th, 2010 at 5:37 pm
🙂 Ahhh, the poetry of conversations!
THANK YOU for commenting on my poet’s rally post! I so appreciate it!
December 18th, 2010 at 5:50 pm
Hey no problem. I enjoyed reading your work.
December 20th, 2010 at 10:05 am
Yeah… that happens to the best of us. Cute poem.
December 22nd, 2010 at 6:27 pm
Good to know I am not alone!
December 22nd, 2010 at 1:28 am
i completely understand this. the paranoia, frustration and nonchalance of what was forgotten
December 22nd, 2010 at 6:32 pm
Paranoia for sure!
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December 25th, 2010 at 8:16 pm
how are you?
Season’s Greetings!
You are nominated, you win one vote, if you nominate other poets, you win another vote 4 yourself, in addition, voting helps you exposed to other poets and make new friends in our community. Hope to see you vote..
Merry Christmas,
Hope to See you at potluck week 16 tomorrow…
We will have a break after week 16, and come back on week 18…
Blessings!
Your support means a world to us..
xxx
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